Blog #12

Now that I have Spring break to work on my 202 paper, as well as my world politics paper, and my hospitality room’s division paper I am still feeling stressed but I have learned that writing is a process.  When I get back to class I need to block out more time in my day to read the paper out loud to catch my mistakes more.  Once I finish my second draft for my 202 paper it will be time to begin editing and proofreading this draft. I really need to edit really well and improve upon my actual writing and form. Before I was just trying to get my thoughts down on the paper so I would be organized for the next draft but now, IT’S THE BIG TIME.  I need to make my thesis stronger and a statement that is clearer. More details need to be added so it is better for my readers to understand. I also need to move sentences around and possibly whole paragraphs or maybe even omitted. Basically I just need to work my butt off.

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